Cyclonic's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[I Got The Juice]

Drop the rap

The beat was pretty good, but the rapping was not great, you should practice more so the lines flow together better. Now it sounds like your barely keeping up with the music

MaxStayWitaStrap responds:

Good looks on the review unlike some of these herbs at least you dropped something lol...but yeah Im not really trying...Im just MASS RECORDING shit right now so its whatever...Just tryna get a bunch of material together...but good looks on the advice my G

[[OS] Basement in the Sky]

Crazy

The synths in this are pretty sweet, and you composite them together nicely to make a cool modern-sounding track.

ObsidianSnow responds:

Thanks for the review, Cyclonic - I appreciate it!

[-=Timelapse of a Lifetime v1.1]

Bass needs fixing

The bass at 0:40 is really out of tune. Also, the intro is too long. After 30 seconds your expecting much more of an explosion of sound, as apposed to just the addition of the hihat.

Try playing around with more melodies. It gets really repetitive after about 1 minute.

Its an okay idea, it just needs more tinkering.

gasguy responds:

yea, but this one is rated lower then the older one?? wtf

[{Dj-L} New Life (WiP)]

Nice

This sounds great. Definitely keep working on this. You integrate the piano and the synths really well. The melody sounds good.

I'd love to hear this finished.

Meonly70 responds:

I would too, I'm just out of ideas for songs right about now. I'll see what I can cough up. Thanks man.

[[AriA] A Single Breath - WiP]

Really Good

I'm loving this song. Great melodies and sounds.

Only thing is, it needs more drums. The dancey-rave really only starts at around 1:30 and only for a minute. I know this is a WiP, but you might want to have more thumping bass to keep up the dance beat.

Definitely keep working on it!

IndieDance responds:

awesomee k thanks! =]

[pewp lewp]

Sounds okay

Its sounds alright; its just a little boring. Spice it up with some more instruments, I would say. I do like the bass!

Limesauce responds:

thanks! yeah i'll figure something out